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First Chapter Editing Service

Who This is For

• Indie authors looking to refine their story’s opening pages.
• Writers preparing to query agents or self-publish who want to ensure their first chapter is engaging.
• Aspiring authors who have an early draft and want professional feedback before continuing.
• Established authors seeking an objective evaluation of their opening pages.
• Writers looking for a low-commitment way to test professional editing before investing in a full manuscript edit.
• Budget-conscious authors who want actionable feedback they can implement themselves to strengthen their opening.

Why This Service Matters

1. Your First Chapter is Everything – If readers (or agents) aren’t hooked in the first few pages, they may not continue reading.
2. Sets the Foundation – No amount of copyediting can fix a weak opening. A strong first chapter ensures the rest of the book is worth reading.
3. Cost-Effective Way to Get Professional Feedback – Instead of committing to a full manuscript edit, authors can get targeted insights upfront.
4. Developmental Editing is Often Overlooked – Many indie authors prioritize proofreading but skip structural and storytelling refinement.

What You Get

For up to 5,000 words ($5 per additional 500 words), clients receive:

• A professional editorial letter (1–2 pages) outlining strengths, weaknesses, and opportunities for improvement.
• Inline comments highlighting key issues, strengths, and suggestions for refinement.
• A rubric-based evaluation to quantify elements such as character engagement, pacing, and narrative clarity.

Positioning & Competitive Edge

• More than just line edits – This service focuses on deep structural feedback, not just surface-level fixes.
• Combination of inline markup, editorial letter, and rubric – Many competitors only offer one or two of these.
• Industry-awareness approach – Addresses modern reader behaviors, genre expectations, and pacing for today’s market.
• Empowers authors – Clients walk away with insights they can apply to their entire manuscript, not just the first chapter.

Simple, Affordable, Quality

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$40 for up to 5,000 words

$5 per additional 500 words

(Submission cap of 10,000 words total)

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1️⃣ Click Buy Now and complete the purchase→ 2️⃣ Complete and Submit the Manuscript Submission Form → 3️⃣ Receive professional feedback in 7-14 days

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Frequently Asked Questions

1. How many words can I submit?

You can submit up to 5,000 words. If your first chapter is shorter, you may submit two chapters or a combination of scenes—as long as the total word count does not exceed the limit.

2. What kind of feedback will I receive?

You’ll receive:

• A detailed editorial letter with strengths, weaknesses, and next steps.
• Inline comments in your Word document (Track Changes) for specific suggestions.
• A rubric-based evaluation to assess key elements like pacing, character engagement, and prose clarity.

3. How long will it take to get my feedback?

Turnaround time is generally 7-14 days from submission. If there’s a delay, you’ll be notified.

4. What Genres Do You Specialize In?

We can review and provide feedback on any genre; however, much of the value in this style of editing comes from an awareness of genre conventions, stylistic nuances, and natural storytelling instincts. While our editors can offer objective feedback on any project, the depth of insight and refinement may be most valuable in areas where we are more deeply tuned to the genre’s expectations and audience engagement.

Genres Where Our Feedback Will Add the Most Value:

• Science Fiction & Speculative Fiction – Hard and soft sci-fi, near-future realism, space operas, technology-driven narratives, and philosophical explorations.
• Psychological & Philosophical Thrillers – Stories exploring morality, identity, and deep character psychology with a high-tension, cerebral approach.
• Literary Fiction – Works that prioritize prose style, layered themes, and deep character introspection.
• Dark Fantasy & Supernatural Elements – Stories blending the mythical, gothic, or eerie with thought-provoking themes.
• Cross-Genre Works – Experimental fiction that bends traditional boundaries, including hybrid sci-fi/literary, thriller/speculative, or psychological horror. Dystopian & Near-Future Fiction – Thought-provoking explorations of societal collapse, authoritarianism, or survival in shifting realities.
• Mystery & Slow-Burn Suspense – Complex narratives driven by layered reveals, character psychology, and tension-building rather than fast-action pacing.
• Mythic & Folklore-Infused Fiction – Narratives that incorporate legend, oral traditions, and timeless archetypes within contemporary or fantastical settings.
• Horror (Psychological & Existential Horror) – More cerebral, unsettling horror that plays with fear of the unknown, deep anxieties, or philosophical dread.
• Historical Fiction with Speculative or Philosophical Undertones – Stories that re-imagine history through alternative perspectives or thematic depth.

If your genre is not listed or you are unsure whether this is the right fit, we encourage you to reach out for a personalized assessment before booking. We’ll provide an honest evaluation of whether our editing approach aligns with your manuscript’s needs.

5. Will my work remain private and protected?

Yes! Your manuscript remains 100% yours—We do not claim any rights. All manuscript files are securely stored and deleted after the project is complete.

6. What happens after I purchase?

1. You’ll be automatically directed to the submission form to upload your manuscript.
2. Upload your document (.docx format required).
3. You’ll receive confirmation, and We’ll get to work on your feedback!

7. What if my chapter is longer than 5,000 words?

If your submission exceeds 5,000 words, you can purchase additional word count at $5 per extra 500 words (up to a 10,000 word total maximum). If your submission exceeds 5,000 words, We will follow up before proceeding. Additional word add-on is sent via invoice and must be paid before manuscript work begins.

8. Do You Offer Full Manuscript Editing?

Yes, but on a case-by-case basis. While the First Chapter Edit service is designed for short excerpts, We can offer full manuscript editing and Substantive/developmental review for longer works. If you’re interested in a more extensive edit, please reach out directly to discuss availability, pricing, and the best approach for your project. A custom proposal and timeline will be provided based on the scope of work.

9. Can I Schedule a One-on-One Consultation for My Project?

If you’re looking for direct feedback, brainstorming, or strategic guidance on your manuscript, we offer one-on-one development consultations. This is ideal for authors who want personalized insights into story structure, world-building, pacing, or character arcs before diving into a full edit. If you’re interested in a consultation, please contact us to discuss scheduling and pricing.